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©2007-2009 ~Bewinged
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I've taken a long break, but here's the next page of Parma. After this I'll cut back to Argent, I promise.

...The rough sketches always seem so much nicer than the line art. Any got tips on how to keep the line art fluid?


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Animation: Prequel
Comic: First - Previous

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:iconfoxxeh:
Ohhh yay!!!!! More pages!!! :) Happy!
:iconmakio-kuta:
I read this a while ago but forgot to leave a comment. O.O

I find this page's layout a little confusing to read at first glance. I had to contemplate the order of some speech balloons. Maybe I'm just comic reading rusty. The image in the upper left frame looks really nice. XD I like how her hair came out. n.n
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Yeah. I've got some pretty bad layouts. >-.-< This is the last of the pages sketched last year, so hopefully the future ones will be better. I'll try and think more about logical flow.

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